Woah.....
sRGB?
Now, I always understood Adobe RGB to be the standard and have played with ProPhoto RGB too, while I always heard of sRGB as the web standard... what you would convert to for web output. sRGB has a smaller gamut, which is not to say it has fewer colors but?
Do any of you use it as your standard workflow? I admit I never really did any testing, just ran with the color space my retouchers and digital dealers advised me to use. I'm sure there's a big, argumentative thread about this in the archives.
I agree, the shot above, Jack, feels overworked... maybe too much HDR and sharpening? There is some distortion going on, the top of the building gets a little wider (perspective over corrected?).
Lastly, I would of preferred the light maybe an hour or so earlier... much more from the right, allowing some shadow on the left side so that the curve is more delineated. The buildings feel flat to me.
And really lastly, I look at the grass more than anything else. I'd crop all the way up to the closest edge of that seating area, or better yet move 6 feet to the right, lose the seating and let the building stand free of the palm tree, I guarantee an architect will consider placing the tree in front of the building to be sloppy composition.
One of the big reasons I don't like dslr for architecture... the format. If you crop this to 645 or 4x5 (taking it all off the bottom) the eye will be much more focused on the building...
I'm rambling... I need to go get some coffee and bring the boy his lunch (which he left by the back door).
Good start, Jack. I can't wait to see what else you do. And don't mind me if I get very critical, I'm just as nitpicky with myself, I think it's a necessity (as much as a disorder).