What Russ said about composition. I too prefer the lighter version. I would be very interested to know your processing workflow to get to this Tri-X type output. I really like the result., and would love to know how you did it.
This is not a criticism, but in future would you mind terribly making your images a bit smaller? Bandwidth is an issue where I live, and a 1MB+ file takes a while to load. Max width 1200 pixels, max height 850, max size 500KB will do just fine. You gain nothing in perceived image quality for screen viewing if you go any bigger than this. In fact if you go bigger than a standard screen size you can actually make the image look worse, because most browsers try to down-res for viewing and are not very good at it.
Thanks for sharing though.
Ed