Topic: A jock shot (Read 2026 times)

byork · « **on:** June 14, 2009, 07:34:17 am »

A shot from race day....any comments appreciated.[attachment=14548:100_1440.jpg]

dalethorn · « **Reply #1 on:** June 15, 2009, 12:23:42 am »

It comes across clearly as a race jockey, but with no other context, it just seems too dark to provide much interest.

wolfnowl · « **Reply #2 on:** June 15, 2009, 01:16:30 am »

Quote from: dalethorn

It comes across clearly as a race jockey, but with no other context, it just seems too dark to provide much interest.

Yes, it could stand a little lightening up and it wouldn't lose the mood. I'd also be tempted to blur the shoulder/ back of the person behind him.

Mike.

byork · « **Reply #3 on:** June 15, 2009, 01:32:23 am »

Thanks guys....much appreciated.

byork · « **Reply #4 on:** June 15, 2009, 02:22:25 am »

A revised version.

dalethorn · « **Reply #5 on:** June 15, 2009, 02:42:16 am »

Quote from: byork

A revised version.

This looks very good. You captured the expression perfectly.

jasonrandolph · « **Reply #6 on:** June 15, 2009, 02:08:05 pm »

This is an absolutely outstanding portrait! You really captured the emotion and intensity of the jockey. Excellent work!

Jeremy Roussak · « **Reply #7 on:** June 15, 2009, 02:56:05 pm »

Quote from: byork

A revised version.

Yes - an enormous improvement.

Jeremy

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dalethorn

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