Jeremy, They're both fine shots. The only criticism I'd have is that the color shot looks as if it has a blue color cast. I'm assuming that the leg of the bench the person inside the structure is sitting on, and the wall in front of him are actually white instead of blue. When I take the picture into Photoshop, bring up Levels, select the middle gray dropper, and click on the inside of the bench leg I get this:
The colors may not work out properly if your monitor isn't calibrated, but let me know if you agree that the bench and wall are supposed to be white.
Unfortunately I can see that the colors I'm getting back from what I just posted aren't the same colors I see when I make the conversion here. Th red roof has lost too much of its red. If I'm right about the color cast you should be able to make the conversion there and get the proper results.