I like the composition and the color. But your attempts to darken the sky have left halos around some of the high-contrast edges. To me this is pretty distracting.
Maybe I am missing something, I don't see any halo effect (circles I suppose?), other than what I would consider as rim lighting in a backlit scene- the same as I would get when shooting slide film. It is very fine image.JMR
I agree it's a fine image but I don't agree that the haloes are a normal effect. Look at the white haloes along the rooflines in the background. That's the giveaway. I'd back off on the clarity slider. If I really felt I had to darken the sky I'd make a selection (easy job on this one) and use the selection on a masking layer in multiply blend mode. The haloes definitely are a distraction.
I certainly think the image merits some time and effort!Jeremy