My brain is really fried right now, I'm surfing while running data analysis so I may read my comments tomorrow and be ??!!??!! (just a heads up)
I found the first page simple, concise and to the point. Nothing new, but definitely good tips, especially about constantly practicing. It's the go out and try it mentality that tends to prepare us for the best when it happens. I'd mention not disturbing animals, although you say things don't always go as planned, weather and such, but I hate it when people try and tease an animal into a pose.
Second page required a certain level of pondering that is unfortunately beyond me in my current state.
Good idea to post it though =)