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Timo Löfgren

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« on: January 28, 2009, 10:26:00 am »

Wista 4x5"+Nikkor 135mm
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« Reply #1 on: February 01, 2009, 06:29:32 am »

Hi Timo,

Allow me to make some comments on your picture as a new poster here.

I like the tonalities, it gives me a very tranquil feeling, so I hope that's what you wanted to achieve.

In hindsight you might have improved the composition a bit by taking a slightly lower viewpoint such that the light zone of the flat water would have been a bit smaller and brought the horizon somewhat closer to the top of the rock. This might have given a bit more unity in the composition. Just a thought, and pls. realize I'm not an expert critic.
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« Reply #2 on: February 01, 2009, 08:05:58 pm »

Wonderful work. Is it a BW with colour tinges or just colour where the elements are almost BW?

JMR
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