I'm sure she doesn't appreciate being the subject of a Photoshop lesson on a very popular site for photographers.
There are too many problems in this image to "fix" it. I would invite her back for a re-shoot and blame the first on a bad day. Then, light her properly, dress her properly, hire a better hairdresser, and find a talented art director to make it all come together. After all that, watch her mouth, watch her eyebrows, and watch her body language. One has to ask, where was the photographer when this photo was taken?
thanks for the post Misty!
Unfortunately, the clients budget doesn't allow for such indulgences as art directors and hair/makeup artists. Which is why she hired me, a still learning college student...
This image is the shot that she CHOSE out of the 70 portraits we took that day. Others had different outfits, poses, better expressions and better lighting, etc. I suppose the biggest mistake I made here was not editing the shots down to the ones I felt were competently done, and giving her the opportunity to choose one that has a number of rather difficult challenges.
With that said, I'm not sure I was actually asking for your opinion on what I should have done while at the shoot, but rather how I could best make THIS image usable for the client. If you have any input on that, i'd love to hear it as you appear to be someone familiar with corporate headshots, and thus your views here could be beneficial.
FWIW, here is another image from the series, and is one that I MUCH prefer to the one chosen.