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mtnmanjc

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Mesa Verde Moon
« on: December 12, 2008, 07:22:20 PM »

Hey Everyone,

Here is a shot from Mesa Verde from a couple of months ago.

Mesa Verde Moon


Comments and Critiques are greatly appreciated!!

Thanks,
Joel
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« Reply #1 on: December 14, 2008, 12:04:52 AM »

Very cool framing, excellent capture. What time of day (or night!) was it? I really can't tell from the light...
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Happy shooting!

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« Reply #2 on: December 15, 2008, 07:27:07 PM »

It was just before dusk.
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« Reply #3 on: December 17, 2008, 09:17:44 PM »

Any other comments or critiques??  Please be honest!!!!

Thanks,
Joel
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« Reply #4 on: December 17, 2008, 10:19:11 PM »

My two cents. I like the tonalities and the general idea. The thing you named this image after is pretty tiny. IE the moon. I would try straightening the perspective and enlarging the moon slightly. It think it would really pop then. Seriously. It looks too obviously wide angle to me as it is.
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