Hi Nir. Can I make a quick comment about striking a balance between allowing the presentation of your ideas to flow, and on the other hand keeping each section of the tutorial small enough to be absorbed?
Two things that I find block my absorption of a tutorial are long words and repetition of words.
For example, the repetition of "present" in: "Once chosen, a new window will be presented (Figure 2, green) and will present the available graduated filter configurations."
What about, for example: "A new window will appear (Figure 2, green) showing the available graduated filter options."?
Similarly for "Locate the graduated filter on the photograph in the appropriate location". What about: "Drag the filter across the photograph". By the way, your example is quite a good one but on my screen I am having trouble seeing the three parallel lines in figure 2.
The paragraph:
"This capability is even further extended, if you would change one than one of the effects and following it you would click on the top right toggle again, you would have one amount bar called ‘Custom’ which will represent all the changes and once modifies will changes all the appropriate ammounts below respectively."
makes my brain hurt, and the part in italics doesn't make sense to me.
Hope this is of some use, cheers, David
