Wow - someone has some sand in their pantyhose
I said exactly what I meant - it looks litterally like you shone a flashlight on some trees after sunset - pretty boring. I don't know what more detail you want or need...does the brand of the flashlight matter?
You asked "does it work for you?" I answered with "doesn't do anything for me". Here, I'll be a little more clear for you:
Nothing about it appeals to me. It looks like a snapshot, with no interesting main subject, flat light from what appears to be a hand torch, and is over saturated for my taste. No, it does not 'work for me'.
As I said, post what you REALLY want next time. I didn't say anything that was inconsiderate, I posted my opinion which was exactly what you asked for. You even baited your question with "have at it!". I gave you my constructive comment - try it in B&W. There is nothing in that shot that lends itself to a good color composition - that's your key to try B&W.
Maybe members like you that throw a hissy fit should have a special tag under your username so the rest of us know how oversensative you are