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Timo Löfgren

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« on: February 17, 2008, 03:47:34 AM »

...... Pentax 645 35mm/f22 Fuji Velvia 50+B&W pola+Lee sunset
       Nikon coolscan 9000 ED / Place: Vuosaari, Helsinki,  Finland
« Last Edit: February 17, 2008, 11:51:47 AM by Timo Löfgren »
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« Reply #1 on: February 17, 2008, 06:53:56 AM »

I like this picture. I do not have any suggestions about how to improve it, but it would be nice if you included some information about the picture.
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« Reply #2 on: February 17, 2008, 09:55:56 AM »

I very much like the photograph and its composition.  A minor suggestion - the photo is just a bit too symmetrical for my tastes.  I would crop the right about 5% but ensure that the pool of water has sufficient space on the right hand side - then I would crop the bottom to retain the ratio of the photograph (1.25:1 or whatever).  I would like to crop more of the bottom but wouldn't want to sacrifice part of the sky or the beautifully-lit rocks on the left.  Some sharpening would also seem to be in order.
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« Reply #3 on: February 17, 2008, 06:04:36 PM »

Wild colors and very nice composition.  Not sure why there are not more comments on this fine image.  Perhaps when you get it right there is nothing to critique.
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« Reply #4 on: February 17, 2008, 11:09:46 PM »

Thanks Timo for your photograph. The colours are quite beautiful... but... I'm sorry but the first thing I saw was a monsters 2 eyes and mouth as he lay under the water...like one of those creatures in Lord of The Rings, Star Wars type movies. I just felt like I was about to be engulfed into his cavernous mouth.  

Julie
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« Reply #5 on: February 17, 2008, 11:41:07 PM »

Crack kills, dude.
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« Reply #6 on: February 18, 2008, 05:37:41 AM »

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