Topic: Sunrise (Read 4989 times)

Timo Löfgren · « **on:** February 02, 2008, 04:30:38 am »

.... Jihuu

(Pentax 645 + 35mm Fuji new Velvia 50 ..... B&W linear pola + Lee 0,9 grad hard, and straw 3.)

kaelaria · « **Reply #1 on:** February 02, 2008, 10:56:55 am »

It needs more detai to my eye. The bottom 1/4 is pretty much lost - maybe a better crop and some PS tweaks for exposure?

Jonathan Wienke · « **Reply #2 on:** February 02, 2008, 11:06:41 am »

Try cropping it square.

Gabe · « **Reply #3 on:** February 02, 2008, 11:46:29 am »

I agree that a different crop would help -- try either making it square or even landscape.

alainbriot · « **Reply #4 on:** February 03, 2008, 12:13:45 am »

I don't see anything wrong with the composition but I suggest adjusting the color and contrast. Here's a suggestion:

Alain

Neil Hunt · « **Reply #5 on:** February 04, 2008, 04:50:32 pm »

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I don't see anything wrong with the composition but I suggest adjusting the color and contrast. Here's a suggestion:

Alain
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Free master class for you Timo!

DarkPenguin · « **Reply #6 on:** February 04, 2008, 05:06:33 pm »

I like the original. Alain's is nice, too.

Provokot · « **Reply #7 on:** February 05, 2008, 02:40:53 pm »

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I like the original. Alain's is nice, too.
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I'm with Alain. Timo, its a lovely photograph, Alain's consumate experience/skill has made it sing.

larkvi · « **Reply #8 on:** February 10, 2008, 11:48:27 pm »

I like the sense in the original that the rock is both rising out of the sea and out of the shadows--I think Alain's edit somewhat compromises that, and perhaps there could be some middle ground between too much shadow and essentially eliminating it.

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