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gunnar1

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« on: January 27, 2008, 04:34:58 PM »

I'll post both the original and my cropped version.

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« Reply #1 on: January 27, 2008, 05:48:29 PM »

Other than that the second looks infinitely better than the original? As far as just cropping goes, I think you'd done a very good job of removing the distracting elements and focusing on the primary subject, with enough around it to make the eye wonder a little...

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« Reply #2 on: January 28, 2008, 07:05:40 PM »

I'd leave in all the sky, the composition needs more negative space.
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« Reply #3 on: January 31, 2008, 06:22:11 PM »

Thanks Tom. I have cropped a version as you suggested and I do appreciate the additional negative space. Do you think that the overall framing (LxW) works as well that way?
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