I think the composition has potential but you don't need that much distance between the foreground and background. Plus, there's basically empty space between foreground and background elements, so it doesn't add useful information to the image.
You can shorten the distance between the 2 to strengthen the composition. Crouching down or positioning your tripod lower would have achieved that.
I created a composite to show what I have in mind:
Less is more in this situation.