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« on: December 18, 2007, 06:42:12 PM »

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« Reply #1 on: December 18, 2007, 06:47:57 PM »

Hi Jorge-

My immediate thoughts are these:  That the images load slowly and that you have a lot of very similar close-ups of women.  I would have to suggest that you edit the work severely, and only show the best.  

I hope that is helpful.

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« Reply #2 on: January 18, 2008, 08:24:17 PM »

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Hi Jorge-

My immediate thoughts are these:  That the images load slowly and that you have a lot of very similar close-ups of women.  I would have to suggest that you edit the work severely, and only show the best. 

I hope that is helpful.
[a href=\"index.php?act=findpost&pid=161569\"][{POST_SNAPBACK}][/a]

Thanks for the input, (I was away to chiloe on a photo proyect that's why I didn't get back to you before), you are right about too many "close-ups of women", the reason for them beeing there is that they are my clients! I do "books" for these girls, they will kick my butt if I remove their pictures!  funny that the photos load slowly to you, from here, is almost instantly, wonder if that has to do with the server beeing here in chile?
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« Reply #3 on: January 19, 2008, 07:45:19 AM »

Jorge,

You have some strong images on your site.  One thing that is distracting is the credits which appear at the top of the page.."Web Design by...".  Do these credits have to appear in such a large font?  Could they possibly either be shrunk and put on the bottom of the page, or have your credits listed on the About page instead?

I'm just thinking moving the credits to the bottom or to a different page would allow the viewer to focus on your images.

Tim
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« Reply #4 on: January 19, 2008, 11:10:47 AM »

Jorge,
I almost missed that you had more photos by scrolling to the right. I clicked through two or three sections and didn't realize there was more than two to a section.
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« Reply #5 on: January 19, 2008, 11:24:48 AM »

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Jorge,

You have some strong images on your site.  One thing that is distracting is the credits which appear at the top of the page.."Web Design by...".  Do these credits have to appear in such a large font?  Could they possibly either be shrunk and put on the bottom of the page, or have your credits listed on the About page instead?

I'm just thinking moving the credits to the bottom or to a different page would allow the viewer to focus on your images.

Tim
[a href=\"index.php?act=findpost&pid=168133\"][{POST_SNAPBACK}][/a]
You are right! I wish I knew how to program! hate depending on someone to get what you want  the guy that did the page for me didt'n charge much.... that's why...
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« Reply #6 on: January 19, 2008, 11:27:34 AM »

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Jorge,
I almost missed that you had more photos by scrolling to the right. I clicked through two or three sections and didn't realize there was more than two to a section.
[a href=\"index.php?act=findpost&pid=168168\"][{POST_SNAPBACK}][/a]
yeap! on firefox the bar is more evident, safary and explorer.... you have to look for it

thanks for the input!
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