You need something to anchor the photo, there is nowhere to rest or grabs the eye that say's , "start here." No rule of thirds used.
Agree the right side has bright white sky that takes away from the scene, and the path at the bottom is too far to the right edge.
There is no depth to the image, all the branches and leaves appear on the same plane, this could be due to the apparent flat white sky creating a soft box effect. Good light for macros.
hope this helps,