I like the trees, but the composition feels awkward. The branches in the middle strongly draw the eye up towards the upper right corner, but once your eye gets there it's stopped by a dark, confused, congested area. I don't know whether you can change where you're standing in such a way as to rearrange the composition to change that, but it's worth a try.
I'd also convert it to black and white. The branches are so sculptural that their form is what's important, not their color, and the color just distracts from it.
(My 2 cents, anyway.)