As a viewer, I find the low contrast & haziness of the mid-distance and distant mountains to be frustrating. I'd probably not work with this particular photo, but try to get one on a clearer day. Or, failing that, work with a photo that mostly omits the distant regions and focusses on the nearby mountains and glacier. The frustratingly low-contrast distant regions take up too much of the image as it currently stands.
P.S. I've been there, and it's gorgeous. I recognized it immediately. Did you take it from a ways out the trail across the glacier?