No, no, no! Bringing out the blu sky makes sense. Bringing out the front wall absolutely not. It now competes for attention and offers nothing in exchange.
Funny you point that out. As a print, the wall isn't nearly as "bright." This photo is causing me to pull out my hair. It seems to require two treatments: one for print and another for the screen. ... I'm trying to find a solution that works for print as well as the web. Maybe that's not in the cards.
Lately, I've been wondering about that edge where a print is low key and yet still draws the viewer in. Low key works well with characters and pretty models ... I haven't yet found a secret sauce for this particular picture. ... I like the image, so I'll revisit the file in a week or so. I may go back to the site and rephotograph it with an A7r2. I've hammered this Pen F file pretty hard.
Thanks for the feedback.