Todd, I'm not going to criticize technical details. I agree with Sharon that it looks a little soft. But "sharpness," a concept that seems to drive a majority of amateur photographers batty, isn't really that important. For evidence, check HCB's early stuff.
My question is this: What did your mind see when you made this shot? To me it's pretty blah, but I'm not inside your head. I've made plenty of shots like this one. When I looked at them later I'd always realize that what I was doing was trying to ape something that had been advertised as fine art, but that, at least in my own head, simply didn't come off that way. It was a learning process.
