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Alone With Her
« on: August 17, 2017, 06:12:19 pm »

Taken 03/30/13 near the Salton Sea, on the second anniversary of my sister's death.
50mm f1.4, @ 13 seconds, ISO 250.






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Re: Alone With Her
« Reply #1 on: August 17, 2017, 06:51:35 pm »

I like it. The light painting is just right and not blown out. The reflection adds some depth.
 
If it were mine I'd get rid of the partial tree on the left which is a little distracting to me. Nice work!
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Re: Alone With Her
« Reply #2 on: August 17, 2017, 06:59:42 pm »

I like it. The light painting is just right and not blown out. The reflection adds some depth.
 
If it were mine I'd get rid of the partial tree on the left which is a little distracting to me. Nice work!
I agree about the tree.
Thank you.

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« Reply #3 on: August 17, 2017, 09:04:01 pm »

Nice. Second that on removing the tree on left
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Re: Alone With Her
« Reply #4 on: August 17, 2017, 11:43:38 pm »

Beautiful.

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« Reply #5 on: August 18, 2017, 03:25:14 am »

Beautiful. I agree with removing the twigs, and I'd be tempted to delete the horizontal streak of light, too; but that's nitpicking.

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Re: Alone With Her
« Reply #6 on: August 18, 2017, 07:15:20 am »

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Re: Alone With Her
« Reply #7 on: August 18, 2017, 07:21:01 am »

You might be on to something there, I'll try that, and see how it looks.

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