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Dawn Takes Center Stage
« on: August 08, 2017, 11:05:36 am »

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Re: Dawn Takes Center Stage
« Reply #1 on: August 08, 2017, 12:12:39 pm »

Nice light in this and some interesting little details. My primary criticism is that it's not straight. Otherwise, pretty nice!
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Re: Dawn Takes Center Stage
« Reply #2 on: August 08, 2017, 12:31:12 pm »

You're right, Matt. It was canted about 2 degrees to the right. Good eye. I didn't even notice it. Mea culpa. This better?
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Re: Dawn Takes Center Stage
« Reply #3 on: August 08, 2017, 12:40:02 pm »

Yes!
For whatever reason it seems easier to spot a tilt like that in others' work and overlook it in my own. I guess I get focused on whatever it is I'm happy with or wish was a little different that I sometimes miss the most basic issues.
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Re: Dawn Takes Center Stage
« Reply #4 on: August 08, 2017, 06:53:51 pm »

Interesting - straightening does make quite a difference visually.  What the eye is used to and all that I guess.  I really like the almost-wreath of the leaves - nice focal point for me.
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Re: Dawn Takes Center Stage
« Reply #5 on: August 08, 2017, 09:11:00 pm »

Nice light touch on the shadow detail.  Good job.
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Re: Dawn Takes Center Stage
« Reply #6 on: August 09, 2017, 03:42:21 am »

Really good spot of a perfectly lit, interesting detail.
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Re: Dawn Takes Center Stage
« Reply #7 on: August 09, 2017, 09:10:09 am »

Thanks all, and thanks to Matt especially. I can't believe I missed that. Looking at it now the difference it clear as a bell.
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