Hi Jeremy,
Lots of light in this shot Jeremy and that is a good thing.
Can I ask you what is the subject of this image and what is it that you are trying to say?
Not trying to be funny here or anything, but sometimes having a real purpose and point of focus, can give a narrative to an image. Your tree shot discussed previously for instance, the shot was about the tree or perhaps the tree within its landscape, but what did you want the narrative within this shot to be about?
Still, as I said above, I really like the light in this image, as it makes it bright and cheerful, but is that enough I wonder?
Dave