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sdwilsonsct

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The gift
« on: December 10, 2016, 04:28:31 am »

From my forthcoming Christmas card collection...  ;)
Feedback welcome.

michael ellis

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Re: The gift
« Reply #1 on: December 10, 2016, 07:05:59 am »

It's a bit too dark on screen for me to get much of a feel for it.
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Re: The gift
« Reply #2 on: December 10, 2016, 08:43:45 am »

Agree with Michael. As a card it would probably be too dark to be appreciated. Great composition though.
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Re: The gift
« Reply #3 on: December 10, 2016, 09:12:06 am »

It looks nice on my screen, but I agree that it might need to be a little lighter on a printed card.
But don't lighten it enough to kill the mood!
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Re: The gift
« Reply #4 on: December 10, 2016, 11:16:18 am »

It looks nice on my screen, but I agree that it might need to be a little lighter on a printed card.
But don't lighten it enough to kill the mood!

Fair enough. Better?

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Re: The gift
« Reply #5 on: December 10, 2016, 01:37:47 pm »

Maybe a little bit more?
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Re: The gift
« Reply #6 on: December 10, 2016, 02:57:16 pm »

Sure!

And by way of diversion, here's another from last night.

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Re: The gift
« Reply #7 on: December 10, 2016, 04:29:43 pm »

Northern lights? Nice, whatever.

And the third version of the original post has just enough glow on the snow for me.
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« Reply #8 on: December 10, 2016, 06:19:04 pm »

I like the third version & the other image. Should be fun to print.
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« Reply #9 on: December 10, 2016, 08:48:09 pm »

Northern lights? Nice, whatever.

And the third version of the original post has just enough glow on the snow for me.

Agreed on both counts.
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« Reply #10 on: December 10, 2016, 09:34:22 pm »

Something like this...

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« Reply #11 on: December 11, 2016, 09:06:24 am »


And the third version of the original post has just enough glow on the snow for me.

My thought, exactly. The first one was too dark. The one with the northern light is fantastic as it combines the sky/NL and a rural landscape.
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Re: The gift
« Reply #12 on: December 12, 2016, 02:48:15 am »

The first one was too dark.

Maybe because I am sitting in a dark room. Next sunrise here is around noon on January 2.  :)
I agree it would need to be a lot brighter for a print.
Thanks for the feedback!

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Re: The gift
« Reply #13 on: December 13, 2016, 03:31:08 pm »

delicate and poetic image.   Interesting composition, only a little right pending for its volume/trees distribution.
All the best,
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