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David Eckels

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Mountain forest
« on: October 16, 2016, 03:45:48 pm »

I was out yesterday, mid afternoon light. Spectacular view of the Verde Valley from the overlook atop Mingus Mountain. For some reason, this shot through the pines called to me. C&C welcome re rendering.

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Re: Mountain forest
« Reply #1 on: October 17, 2016, 03:44:11 am »

Well seen and well processed. I don't think the blurred tree to the extreme left adds anything, though, and it should be cropped out.

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Re: Mountain forest
« Reply #2 on: October 17, 2016, 03:59:12 am »

Well seen and well processed. I don't think the blurred tree to the extreme left adds anything, though, and it should be cropped out.

Jeremy


Agree with every word!

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Re: Mountain forest
« Reply #3 on: October 17, 2016, 06:04:43 am »

Dave I think the comp is interesting - the processing though is really too crunchy/choppy/contrasty - it overwhelms the subjects. I think it could use some more gradation in tonality. Not sure that blurred section is really doing anything for it. /B
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Re: Mountain forest
« Reply #4 on: October 17, 2016, 09:29:50 am »

Well seen and well processed. I don't think the blurred tree to the extreme left adds anything, though, and it should be cropped out.

Jeremy
I agree, too.
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Re: Mountain forest
« Reply #5 on: October 17, 2016, 10:53:08 am »

It represents one of my fears: lost in the woods with only my panic for company. So it works.

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