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Jeremy Roussak

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« on: October 13, 2016, 02:37:22 pm »
Not sure about this one. Is it mystically dark, or just gloomy? Opinions, as ever, valued.

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Re: dying
« Reply #1 on: October 13, 2016, 08:27:03 pm »
It's quite spooky, but I would be tempted to add a bit of vignette, and especially to darken the lightish blobs in the lower left corner, as I find them distracting.
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Re: dying
« Reply #2 on: October 14, 2016, 06:53:36 am »
I'm in full agreement with Eric's suggestions but it's already very good in its initial version.
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Re: dying
« Reply #3 on: October 14, 2016, 07:10:51 am »
AAArrrrgggghhhh!!!!!!! Gasp.
« Last Edit: October 14, 2016, 07:59:22 am by RSL »
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Re: dying
« Reply #4 on: October 14, 2016, 09:26:28 am »
Quote from: RSL on October 14, 2016, 07:10:51 am
AAArrrrgggghhhh!!!!!!! Gasp.
No, Russ. It's not an 86-year-old, I'm pretty sure it's a spry 77-year-old.
Like me.  :D
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Re: dying
« Reply #5 on: October 14, 2016, 11:27:03 am »
Now you're talking, Jeremy!

Love it.

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Re: dying
« Reply #6 on: October 14, 2016, 03:21:56 pm »
But, Jeremy, the blossom isn't perfect! ;) I like it and I think the B&W decision is a great one.
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Re: dying
« Reply #7 on: October 15, 2016, 01:12:22 pm »
Sorry about the blossom, David. I got there just too late.

I read, I consider and I find that agree. Here's a revised version.

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Re: dying
« Reply #8 on: October 15, 2016, 01:54:39 pm »
I agree, too; it's an improvement.
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Re: dying
« Reply #9 on: October 15, 2016, 05:19:57 pm »
Quote from: Arlen on October 15, 2016, 01:54:39 pm
I agree, too; it's an improvement.
Yes!!
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Re: dying
« Reply #10 on: October 15, 2016, 05:29:20 pm »
Quote from: Arlen on October 15, 2016, 01:54:39 pm
I agree, too; it's an improvement.

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