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Jeremy Roussak

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ebb 2
« on: May 30, 2016, 02:13:47 pm »

Thoughts?

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Re: ebb 2
« Reply #1 on: May 30, 2016, 02:20:38 pm »

Nicely timed, but I'd like to see the light areas a bit lighter. The approaching line of surf feels gray instead of white, for instance.

But be careful not to make the scene look too harsh.

Just my two farthings.

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Re: ebb 2
« Reply #2 on: May 30, 2016, 02:35:58 pm »

Nicely timed, but I'd like to see the light areas a bit lighter. The approaching line of surf feels gray instead of white, for instance.

But be careful not to make the scene look too harsh.

Just my two farthings.

-Eric

You're not wrong, Eric. As so often when someone points out an error, I'm forced to wonder how I could have made it. I was concentrating on bringing out a little detail in the advancing wave; I overdid it.

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Re: ebb 2
« Reply #3 on: May 30, 2016, 06:05:19 pm »

Yes! That's more like it.
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