Very hard to assess at such a small size. I assume you would anticipate printing this A2 or more? It is certainly interesting and clever but I am not sure I like it. Perhaps it's because I'm not attuned to the beach images?
This is a large piece--72" long. It's intended for a commercial space--hotel, hospital, office building, etc. The image becomes more abstract the further away it is from the viewer. The picture is for and about the Florida west coast. It would be out of place in Nebraska, Finland, or England.