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Jose Viegas

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Does this one work? Your opinions pls.
« on: March 31, 2016, 05:32:20 am »

Does this shot work for you? I'm not sure, though I saw it and shoot it at the time.



Thanks for taking your time to look and comment.
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Re: Does this one work? Your opinions pls.
« Reply #1 on: March 31, 2016, 05:39:47 am »

A family image? It has a certain appeal but I wouldn't describe it as "fine art" Have you tried a B&W rendering? It is a little flat therefore B&W might be better?

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« Reply #2 on: March 31, 2016, 05:42:48 am »

Thank you for your reply. It's not a family shot, I don't know the kids, but it's true, it could be. I wouldn't pretend it to be fine art either, maybe just Street?  ???
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« Reply #3 on: March 31, 2016, 10:14:29 am »

Crop it below the kid's hands and you might get something out of it. But even then, it's probably too split into two bits. Two interrupted conversations? Maybe it's actually touching the edges of surreal.

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« Reply #4 on: March 31, 2016, 10:50:01 am »

I can't believe I'm suggesting a crop. A remaining problem is the gaze of the kid camera right. He should be looking at the horse. He isn't he's looking at something outside the scene.
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« Reply #5 on: March 31, 2016, 11:04:08 am »

I can't believe I'm suggesting a crop. A remaining problem is the gaze of the kid camera right. He should be looking at the horse. He isn't he's looking at something outside the scene.


Yeah, but you still made a good crop of it!

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Re: Does this one work? Your opinions pls.
« Reply #6 on: March 31, 2016, 11:32:15 am »

Nope.

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« Reply #7 on: March 31, 2016, 01:10:29 pm »

Thank you again, guess I was right in my doubts about it  ::)

@RSL I did like your crop better then the original.
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« Reply #8 on: March 31, 2016, 02:59:52 pm »

Thanks, Jose. It's just the rule of thirds at work.
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« Reply #9 on: March 31, 2016, 04:23:47 pm »

Hey, Russ! Somebody hacked your LuLa account and suggested a crop!!!    :o

Actually, the kid is looking behind the horse, waiting for something to drop.
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