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maddogmurph

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Point Arena
« on: March 26, 2016, 07:21:58 pm »

A couple from yesterday.
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Re: Point Arena
« Reply #1 on: March 26, 2016, 11:47:37 pm »

Both are very nice. I like the first one best. Better though without the seagull.
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Re: Point Arena
« Reply #2 on: March 27, 2016, 02:14:19 am »

You do get around to some awesome places, Maddog. Looks like it was a beautiful day out there.
(I kind of like the seagull.)
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Re: Point Arena
« Reply #3 on: March 27, 2016, 02:18:21 pm »

Landscape with the gull gets my vote(if we're voting)
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Re: Point Arena
« Reply #4 on: March 27, 2016, 09:37:56 pm »

I like how the U-shaped foreground on the top one frames the scene. I would crop some off the bottom, though, to give more prominence to the cliffs and lighthouse.
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Re: Point Arena
« Reply #5 on: March 29, 2016, 07:15:22 am »

I also like the first image a lot. The light in both is gorgeous but the composition on the first is tighter/better/stronger. It helps me to focus on the lighthouse.
Well done.
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Re: Point Arena
« Reply #6 on: March 29, 2016, 11:55:41 am »

Both very nice but I agree there is a little too much repetitive foreground in the first. The water texture and color in the second is wonderful.
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