Hello Maddogmurph,
Thank you for considering this foto so closely. Your candor is very much appreciated, as is LuLa and the chance to discuss our work with equally committed photographers.
I, too, am sitting on the fence about this one. Sometimes it looks good to me; other times it looks nowhere near good. (Oh for subjectivity and it's slippery behavior.)
As you so well say, the murky color scheme and the bright reflection are problematic. I found this image a year ago with my Sigma DP2 Quattro and promptly blew out the highlights. The most recent Sigma editor helped me recover some of them, but perhaps I didn't get enough ?
Looking forward to seeing more of your work- especially a refection one.
Richard
PS- Thanks for the kind words about the fotos on my website.