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sdwilsonsct

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Way in
« on: March 23, 2016, 10:54:34 am »

Near Kiruna, Sweden.
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Re: Way in
« Reply #1 on: March 23, 2016, 11:08:27 am »

Scott - Very nice subjects/composition... I think a little too wan...very atmoshperic though maybe at the expense of helping "the well defined structure" of the image?  Also, in middle of frame I see what looks like a magenta/viridian band resembling "lens cast"? /B
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Re: Way in
« Reply #2 on: March 23, 2016, 12:27:59 pm »

It is a beautiful image (quite Westfjords like in Iceland). That colour band needs tending to.

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Re: Way in
« Reply #3 on: March 23, 2016, 01:57:54 pm »

I like the atmosphere of that one ;)

Well captured.

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Re: Way in
« Reply #4 on: March 23, 2016, 01:59:23 pm »

Beautiful composition. I agree with Rajan about the color banding. I would also add a little more contrast to the image. As presented it's a little flat.
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Re: Way in
« Reply #5 on: March 23, 2016, 05:37:32 pm »

Nicely composed.  IMO the contrast is fine and honors the nature of the light.
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Re: Way in
« Reply #6 on: March 24, 2016, 08:14:32 am »

Many thanks! I'll keep these comments in mind as I work further on the picture.

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Re: Way in
« Reply #7 on: March 25, 2016, 07:12:02 pm »

Beautiful composition and the atmosphere is captured well.

I realize it is a "grey" day, but having been in similar conditions a number of times, I should think the tonal values just below "neutral grey" could be a zone or two higher - not to be white-out conditions, but to give more life to the snow. The brightness of the sun will have caused the values to be lowered; bringing them back up again -without raising the values of the dark/black rock- just may help.
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Re: Way in
« Reply #8 on: March 25, 2016, 08:48:47 pm »

Beautiful composition and the atmosphere is captured well.

I realize it is a "grey" day, but having been in similar conditions a number of times, I should think the tonal values just below "neutral grey" could be a zone or two higher - not to be white-out conditions, but to give more life to the snow. The brightness of the sun will have caused the values to be lowered; bringing them back up again -without raising the values of the dark/black rock- just may help.
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Re: Way in
« Reply #9 on: March 26, 2016, 06:27:15 am »

It's an invitation to venture into the landscape and discover what lies beyond these mountains…
Well done.
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Re: Way in
« Reply #10 on: March 29, 2016, 04:32:53 am »

Beautiful composition and the atmosphere is captured well.

I realize it is a "grey" day, but having been in similar conditions a number of times, I should think the tonal values just below "neutral grey" could be a zone or two higher - not to be white-out conditions, but to give more life to the snow. The brightness of the sun will have caused the values to be lowered; bringing them back up again -without raising the values of the dark/black rock- just may help.

Good points, Terry. This version does not do justice to the bright snow. Further, I have another version with more sunlight in the center valley that I look forward to processing.

Eric, Francois:  glad you liked it.

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Re: Way in
« Reply #11 on: March 29, 2016, 05:28:57 am »

Great composition and mystery.

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Re: Way in
« Reply #12 on: March 30, 2016, 06:06:54 pm »

Beautiful composition with some great lines and texture drawing me in!

There is an odd color band that catches my eye as well as a dust spot but those should both be easy to correct and really make the image shine. I agree it could also be a tad brighter. All minor issues.
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