I think these are the first photographs you've posted that I just can't warm up to. I know how proficient a photographer you are in every respect, so I'm not just saying this to stir the pot, but with the high contrast and faux vignetting, these remind me of high school darkroom days before we learned the finer points of photography and "edgy" was all we knew. That being said, given the subject matter, perhaps your treatment is successful in making me feel this way!