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mseawell

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Lightstorm
« on: March 09, 2016, 08:38:43 am »

Bryce Canyon from a different perspective...light storm.
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Re: Lightstorm
« Reply #1 on: March 09, 2016, 10:53:14 am »

I appreciate what you are trying to do with this but IMO you have pushed the file a bit past its data content - halos etc.  Just my opinion.
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Re: Lightstorm
« Reply #2 on: March 09, 2016, 10:56:06 am »

It does look a little over processed on my monitor. You could try sharpening the foreground interest and blurring the rocks at the back. Composition looks fine.

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Re: Lightstorm
« Reply #3 on: March 09, 2016, 12:00:29 pm »

Good points. I was REALLY pushing this image on purpose. I have another slightly different perspective that I'm playing with. I know I'm not "done" yet. Are we every??

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Re: Lightstorm
« Reply #4 on: March 09, 2016, 05:24:21 pm »

The composition is nice but I agree with everyone about the processing.
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Re: Lightstorm
« Reply #5 on: March 10, 2016, 04:29:38 am »

Same here, pushed a bit too far!
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Re: Lightstorm
« Reply #6 on: March 10, 2016, 08:35:55 am »

I'm just going to re-attack! Thanks for the comments everyone!

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Re: Lightstorm
« Reply #7 on: March 11, 2016, 04:12:49 am »

Not sure if it is possible, but I would prefer a composition without superposition of tree and background rocks/pinnacles.
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