I vote for the second crop, which feels balanced and complete, to me.
But I'm pretty sure Russ would prefer the big scene in your other thread, which I assume is the original (I haven't gone back to it to check).
To me it seems as if you got three great images on that one evening: The dangerous stop on the way, the big sunset scene in the other thread today, and this "picture within a picture." A pretty good day's work.
Eric
P.S. Russ is reliably consistent.