It depends on what you were intending. Did you intend this to be mostly a silhouette composition?
In my opinion, a silhouette should have no interior detail. The observation of some detail in the faces, makes this an incorrectly exposed shot. Either show the detail or go for no detail. This resulting "a little too much of both and not enough of neither" I find distracting.
I do like the bands of light though.
So as the photographer, what look were you intending?