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verma_deepak

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mirror...
« on: November 14, 2015, 02:17:17 pm »

Please provide ur feedback
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Re: mirror...
« Reply #1 on: November 15, 2015, 08:10:29 am »


I might have tried to straighten the horizon but that is personal taste. Also there is quite a bit of dust that could do with spotting out  ;)

Overall though as a picture I like it.


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Re: mirror...
« Reply #2 on: November 15, 2015, 02:14:48 pm »

I might have tried to straighten the horizon but that is personal taste. Also there is quite a bit of dust that could do with spotting out  ;)

Overall though as a picture I like it.

Dave

I agree with both comments. I think it's worth a bit of work.

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Re: mirror...
« Reply #3 on: November 16, 2015, 04:31:19 am »

Thanks..I really appreciate your feedback..
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Re: mirror...
« Reply #4 on: November 16, 2015, 05:24:10 am »

I like the light, and the location seems very good. I find the people distracting, I wonder if there is a stronger image, with just the clouds, sea, and sand?

As others have said, it is worth it to level the horizon, spot clean the image, and also to correct for the strong barrel distortion on the horizon.

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Re: mirror...
« Reply #5 on: November 16, 2015, 09:52:50 am »

I like the light, and the location seems very good. I find the people distracting, I wonder if there is a stronger image, with just the clouds, sea, and sand?

As others have said, it is worth it to level the horizon, spot clean the image, and also to correct for the strong barrel distortion on the horizon.
I mostly agree with Paulo and the others, and I usually don't like people in photos unless they add something to the scene. In this image, the "ghostliness" of the people seems to add to the mood. Just my two farthings.
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Re: mirror...
« Reply #6 on: November 20, 2015, 12:46:07 pm »

It's a great shot. I like the "apparitions" on the left side.

...a bit of dust that could do with spotting out.

After getting bitten (ykw) by dust on a wide-angle lens pointed toward a sunset, I think wide-angle lenses should come with a duster attached with a lanyard.
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Re: mirror...
« Reply #7 on: November 20, 2015, 09:51:08 pm »

strong but well working ( and well underscoring the spots, I know the problem...)contrast, very good colours.
I like also the robust composition and the "ghosts"....

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Re: mirror...
« Reply #8 on: November 24, 2015, 02:05:23 am »

Thanks Guys, I will remove dust spots and straiten the horizon..thanks for constructive feedback and the good words..
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Re: mirror...
« Reply #9 on: November 25, 2015, 12:14:13 pm »

Hi, Please provide feedback to my another pic
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Re: mirror...
« Reply #10 on: November 26, 2015, 02:20:49 pm »

I like the light, and the location seems very good. I find the people distracting, I wonder if there is a stronger image, with just the clouds, sea, and sand?

As others have said, it is worth it to level the horizon, spot clean the image, and also to correct for the strong barrel distortion on the horizon.

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Re: mirror...
« Reply #11 on: November 27, 2015, 06:08:48 am »

Pesky people, always getting in the way of good shots!!

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Re: mirror...
« Reply #12 on: December 10, 2015, 09:04:16 pm »

Wonderful scene and composition.

I agree with the dust suggestions; the dust was the first detail I noticed. this image is really worth investing a few minutes to clean it up.

I also  would have applied an ND filter to get rid of the people and ad some softness to the clouds.
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