Hi Scott,
Thanks for commenting on the river foto.
I'm intrigued by your suggestion for framing the top and bottom with foliage. It's my intent to make these fotos express the fecundity of these wetlands - as much as I can. So having more living subjects in the frame would be a helpful addition. (They say a good foto leaves out what's unnecessary, but for this subject I don't think a minimalistic approach can be used.)
About the title, I agree with you. It's much too obscure.
Thanks again,
Richard