The white border is much too thick and distract the viewer from the picture. The black and white is very nice and powerful and the composition is excellent. However, as a whole, this photo doesn't speak to me. It's not clear what the main subject is (the plank? the first building? those at the back? all of the above?), and whatever it is, it triggers no emotion in me, beyond a sense of satisfaction at looking at a nicely composed and post-processed image.