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Hayhill

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Sunrise-LaSal Mtns-Arches NP
« on: September 25, 2015, 06:09:24 pm »

Sunrise in Arches NP
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Re: Sunrise-LaSal Mtns-Arches NP
« Reply #1 on: September 25, 2015, 10:01:40 pm »

Awesome but image seems way overexposed to me ??

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Re: Sunrise-LaSal Mtns-Arches NP
« Reply #2 on: September 29, 2015, 03:47:16 am »

Great composition, with a good balance between foreground (shrub) and background (butte). The sky is also good.

IMO, the processing is too "hdr-esque".

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Re: Sunrise-LaSal Mtns-Arches NP
« Reply #3 on: September 29, 2015, 04:19:00 am »

Awesome but image seems way overexposed to me ??

Dwayne Oakes

Agreed. You need more tone and contrast.

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Re: Sunrise-LaSal Mtns-Arches NP
« Reply #4 on: September 29, 2015, 04:24:02 am »

Great shot but, as noted, post-processing needs improvements.

Edit: typo correction
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Re: Sunrise-LaSal Mtns-Arches NP
« Reply #5 on: September 29, 2015, 09:49:20 am »

Lots to like here, but we might expect the foreground to look a little darker with such a bright background. Also, the colour of the foreground looks like it was shot under a cloudy sky, and this contrasts with the sunrise.

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Re: Sunrise-LaSal Mtns-Arches NP
« Reply #6 on: September 30, 2015, 10:08:04 pm »

Nice job. I think your post processing is pretty good and almost there. The sky seems a little bit crispy and could use some backing off the local contrast. As others mentioned, the foreground might look better a little bit darker which would add to the mood. Overall, it's  a good looking photograph. Thanks for sharing.
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