Thank you for posting your image.
I think your crop works really well, but I don't like the oversaturation of the reds at all, especially on her skin. It looks as if she has been severely sunburned, scalded, or sitting around a blazing fire for way too long. The oversaturation conflicts with the gentle mood of the image and in my opinion doesn't work.
I actually prefer the textures of the fabric and wallpaper, and the shapes of the curved arm of the chair, knee and breast. What about an black and white of this image?? Anyone far more skilled than I able to post that option?