The subject arangement is scrambled with nothing really bringing in focus/clarity to the image frame...and the tonality is so wan...accentuating that...and tonality/atmosphere in and of itself can't pull something like this together. In particular the similar shape of dark mass in fg right "negates" the clouds in bg...causing the eye to alternate between things at "edge of the frame"...meanwhile there is just pale vaguely distinct grass, sky,and some animals in nearly the entirety of the frame adjacent.