Give it another try without the cloud cover.
I'm itching to see it uncropped, with the horizon dead center, separating chaos (the sky) from peace (the water), and thumbing your nose at the "Rule of Thirds."It definitely sets up sky versus water, so why not give them equal space.
Sure, I'll put it up. I hear what you're saying about the "rule of thirds." Being an iconoclast, it's always fun to break art rules.
Here is the FF.
With a clear sky this scene should look minimalist-lovely. All tone, no texture. -Dave-