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Chairman Bill

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Study of a door & lock
« on: August 06, 2015, 06:20:54 pm »

C&C welcome

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Re: Study of a door & lock
« Reply #1 on: August 06, 2015, 10:43:16 pm »

The picture shows a lot of technical finesse. However, I think the composition is a bit staid. It's a great subject. Are you interested exploring it further?
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Re: Study of a door & lock
« Reply #2 on: August 07, 2015, 12:17:32 am »

A great place for doors is Rajasthan.

Cheers,
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Re: Study of a door & lock
« Reply #3 on: August 07, 2015, 03:40:42 am »

I like it and the processing. Done a lot of similar things but don't post any for viewing because I think the feedback would be mostly negative. :(

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Re: Study of a door & lock
« Reply #4 on: August 07, 2015, 07:26:29 am »

The picture shows a lot of technical finesse. However, I think the composition is a bit staid. It's a great subject. Are you interested exploring it further?

I see what you mean about the composition, but I was trying to maintain something of a door-like perspective, whilst obviously making the lock a major feature.

My main issue was concerning the B&W conversion. I'm always looking for advice on how I can improve this - much of my work is taken with a monochrome form in mind, and so much of my output is monochrome. I'm always after the best B&W I can get.

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Re: Study of a door & lock
« Reply #5 on: August 07, 2015, 08:57:39 am »

...(lots deleted)...I'm always after the best B&W I can get.

Well, I think you're smack right on the money with your BW processing. Superb imho.
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Re: Study of a door & lock
« Reply #6 on: August 07, 2015, 09:50:17 am »

I think the BW conversion is just right, and I like the composition, too. It shows the fantastic lock well while providing enough door (with excellent detail) to give a good context.
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Re: Study of a door & lock
« Reply #7 on: August 07, 2015, 11:14:56 am »

It's nice, Bill, but it doesn't give me a transcendental experience.
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Re: Study of a door & lock
« Reply #8 on: August 07, 2015, 01:52:12 pm »

It's nice, Bill, but it doesn't give me a transcendental experience.
It's all hand of man, so I don't know what you're moaning about  ;)

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Re: Study of a door & lock
« Reply #9 on: August 16, 2015, 01:35:46 pm »

My main issue was concerning the B&W conversion. I'm always looking for advice on how I can improve this - much of my work is taken with a monochrome form in mind, and so much of my output is monochrome. I'm always after the best B&W I can get.

I think the processing is spot on. The tones are wonderful, just the sort of thing I hope for and usually fail to achieve.

Jeremy
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