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Jeremy Roussak

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« on: July 04, 2015, 02:04:46 pm »
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« Reply #1 on: July 04, 2015, 03:15:30 pm »
I would open shadows just a tad.
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« Reply #2 on: July 04, 2015, 06:53:17 pm »
nice
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Re: arat
« Reply #3 on: July 04, 2015, 08:16:42 pm »
Very nice. I agree with Slobodan—consider bumping up the shadows just a touch. It doesn't need much, though.
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Re: arat
« Reply #4 on: July 05, 2015, 12:59:52 pm »
Quote from: kikashi on July 04, 2015, 02:04:46 pm
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Shadows up, as pointed out by Slobodan, but nail your white and black points first (in LR, shift+double-click on Whites then the same on Blacks). I'm willing to bet you could also bring the Exposure up a bit, too. While you're at it, reduce the Saturation or Vibrance. the sky, in particular, seems overly intense. I imagine the rocks are quite vibrant.
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« Reply #5 on: July 06, 2015, 04:12:29 am »
I tried Terry's suggestions and it goes int he right direction… It's a very nice image to begin with.
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