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stamper

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Eleven O'Clock
« on: June 06, 2015, 08:20:51 am »

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Re: Eleven O'Clock
« Reply #1 on: June 06, 2015, 10:00:05 am »

Nice scene and light on the row of houses. I might prefer a bit more smooth sky, but that's probably just me
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Re: Eleven O'Clock
« Reply #2 on: June 06, 2015, 01:16:56 pm »

Nice scene and light on the row of houses. I might prefer a bit more smooth sky, but that's probably just me

I agree with pegelli about the grainy sky. If in the other details there would be a bit of more grain too then one could say it an effect but hre somehow the grainy sly and the not grainy buildings are not working together.
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Re: Eleven O'Clock
« Reply #3 on: June 09, 2015, 06:00:05 am »

Same feeling about the sky but it's a minor detail and it's easy to fix.
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Re: Eleven O'Clock
« Reply #4 on: June 09, 2015, 10:21:29 am »

B&W isn't meant in any way to convey reality so there is more scope for interpretation? This is what I liked at the time but I take on board the comments.
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