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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: RobbieV on October 24, 2013, 05:09:16 pm

Title: Waterdown
Post by: RobbieV on October 24, 2013, 05:09:16 pm

(http://farm3.staticflickr.com/2870/10434148786_22bd84f728_b.jpg) (http://www.flickr.com/photos/vizereveals/10434148786/)
Fall in Waterdown (http://www.flickr.com/photos/vizereveals/10434148786/) by VizeReveals (http://www.flickr.com/people/vizereveals/), on Flickr

Comments/edits/critiques very much appreciated.

Title: Re: Waterdown
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on October 24, 2013, 05:16:35 pm

Nice and serene.

I would crop out the leftmost edge to eliminate two bright orange spots (one in the lower third, the other in the upper corner),

Title: Re: Waterdown
Post by: RobbieV on October 25, 2013, 01:34:11 pm

Thanks Slobodan.

One of the few shots from the shoot where I didn't go for focus across the frame. I personally felt it works here.

Title: Re: Waterdown
Post by: RSL on October 25, 2013, 03:23:45 pm

I've been struggling with this one for a day, Robbie, and I agree with you. I think Slobodan's wrong about the crop. As far I'm concerned it's just about perfect as is. Ready to hang.

Title: Re: Waterdown
Post by: sdwilsonsct on October 25, 2013, 03:40:04 pm

Quote from: RobbieV on October 25, 2013, 01:34:11 pm

...I didn't go for focus across the frame. I personally felt it works here.

Absolutely. Nice job.