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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Seoonmie on October 20, 2013, 09:35:15 am

Title: Early Winter at Hitonhauta
Post by: Seoonmie on October 20, 2013, 09:35:15 am
First day of winter at Hitonhauta (translates Devil's Grave) in Central Finland.

October 19th, 2013, Hitonhauta

(http://jjuntunen.kuvat.fi/kuvat/Kuvia+metsist%E4/Talvi_tuli_Hitonhaudalle/Heijastus_Hitonhaudalla-1442.jpg/_img1280.jpg)
Title: Re: Early Winter at Hitonhauta
Post by: Jim Pascoe on October 21, 2013, 04:04:38 am
Confused, and confusing - to my eye.  Might work in a series of shots, but not as a standalone image in my opinion.  Good range f tones though.  The long snow-covered object on the right is very distracting.

Jim
Title: Re: Early Winter at Hitonhauta
Post by: francois on October 21, 2013, 05:19:48 am
Confused, yes this is also my thought. I have a hard time to discern what is refection from other stuff (for a lack of a better word). It could be called Winter chaos…
Title: Re: Early Winter at Hitonhauta
Post by: Christoph C. Feldhaim on October 21, 2013, 06:50:48 am
I'd suggest to turn the image 180 degree to have the trees standing upright.
Confusion will arise at a later and less confusing point then ... ;)

Cheers
~Chris
Title: Re: Early Winter at Hitonhauta
Post by: Seoonmie on October 21, 2013, 10:35:48 am
Thank you gentlemen! Interesting comments. I was really keen on seeing how others might react to this picture. To me it's content and meaning is clear. It is a winter day reflection of (mainly) snowy spruce trees on a small pond. Yes, there is a lot of chaos. But that't how I saw this location. Not orderly, not willing to please the human eye. It was as it is. Jim is right, btw. It is a part of a larger series. Thank you all, once more!