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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Chris Calohan on March 20, 2013, 08:28:09 am

Title: Mustard on Lettuce
Post by: Chris Calohan on March 20, 2013, 08:28:09 am
(http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8099/8574875730_6ee0f0ac1e_o.jpg)
Title: Re: Mustard on Lettuce
Post by: petermfiore on March 20, 2013, 08:52:40 am
New and ripe cheese?



Peter
Title: Re: Mustard on Lettuce
Post by: Chris Calohan on March 20, 2013, 09:02:06 am
I've never seen new cheese. Is it really green?
Title: Re: Mustard on Lettuce
Post by: francois on March 20, 2013, 11:21:41 am
Quote from: Chris Calohan on March 20, 2013, 09:02:06 am
I've never seen new cheese. Is it really green?

I've seen "new" cheese and it's not green. Really old cheese might turn green…

 ;D
Title: Re: Mustard on Lettuce
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on March 20, 2013, 11:28:25 am
Quote from: Chris Calohan on March 20, 2013, 09:02:06 am
I've never seen new cheese. Is it really green?
Green cheese it what the moon is supposedly made of.  ;)
Title: Re: Mustard on Lettuce
Post by: nemo295 on March 20, 2013, 02:11:22 pm
I like the juxtaposition of the two colors, but I'm not sure this works, either as a close-up of architectural detail or as an abstract graphic. I think it needs more context. I'd like to see a shot of the whole door in its setting.
Title: Re: Mustard on Lettuce
Post by: Chris Calohan on March 20, 2013, 02:12:11 pm
Sun's gone today but will reshoot when it comes back out.
Title: Re: Mustard on Lettuce
Post by: nemo295 on March 20, 2013, 02:17:48 pm
Quote from: Chris Calohan on March 20, 2013, 02:12:11 pm
Sun's gone today but will reshoot when it comes back out.

Cool. I'd like to see what you come up with.
Title: Re: Mustard on Lettuce
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on March 20, 2013, 02:23:54 pm
Cool idea.

Since you can go back and reshoot, I would like to see more of that green. The yellow is so strong, it is overpowering the green. Definitely worth exploring different framings. Do not forget to try square as well.